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Can you feel me? I'm not there
Just the wind running through your hair.
Can you see me? Why would one
Notice the beams of summer sun?
Can you hear me? I don't believe
You'd notice the rustle of autumn leaves.
Can you smell me? I'll explain
The cleansing scent of springtime rain.
Can you taste me? Don't you know
The icy bite of winter snow?
Can you love me? Why would you?
You don't notice me when I want you too.
Just the wind running through your hair.
Can you see me? Why would one
Notice the beams of summer sun?
Can you hear me? I don't believe
You'd notice the rustle of autumn leaves.
Can you smell me? I'll explain
The cleansing scent of springtime rain.
Can you taste me? Don't you know
The icy bite of winter snow?
Can you love me? Why would you?
You don't notice me when I want you too.
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This is an emo love poem I wrote to my crush. He doesn't know I'm alive. I was gonna give it to him today (as a secret-admirer-type-thing) , but the entire city's snowed in. So I haven't seen him in two days. But whatever.
Happy Valentine's Day!
~star
Happy Valentine's Day!
~star
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It's pretty, but a tad bitter. Still, I bet he'll like it, even if he has no idea who wrote it. I want to know his reaction (if you see it!)
I've had four cancelations too- we're also having testing so the sechdule is really messed up.
I've had four cancelations too- we're also having testing so the sechdule is really messed up.