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Abstract

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Sometimes
I do portraits
The slender lines
The varied shades
Create together
A picture-perfect
Personality

Sometimes
I do comics
Bold strokes
Vivid colors
Panels hiding
The unexpected
Laughter

Sometimes
I do still-life
A steady hand
An ordinary bowl
Arranging fruit
In an often unseen
Beauty

And sometimes
I do abstracts
The swirls of shape
The blocks of light
Come together
In an asymmetric
Whole

Sometimes
People see my portraits, comics, still-life
They tell me
"That's not right"
But in my heart
My abstract will always be
Perfect.
I know I said Remus and Tonks would be next, but I've been feeling over-critiqued on various pieces. And I've found that you can't really critique abstract work because it's all about what the artist feels.

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oh yes you can!
But, as poetry works in special ways and you clearly don't want critique, I'll refrain for the moment. ^o^